02-09-2012, 04:06 AM
Some thoughts for Peach:
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The arm is definitely something you need to fix. It looks wobbly right now (and it shouldn't!), my suggestion to fix that up is to emphasis the elbow a bit more and straighten it out. The glove and skin tones blend really easily on my monitor, so I also added some contrast to make the glove more obvious. I poofed the dress, but that's how I see Peach's design, feel free to keep the original if you like that better. The face looks "wrong" but I can't quite say exactly why. I tried to make the eyelashes noticeable, and I moved the nose up a bit. The overall effect is that her head is tilted upwards a tiny bit. I also sharpened her chin a bit by making it more of a corner where it should be; due to the size yours looks soft. Finally I darkened the lips to make them more noticeable. You're doing a good job so far, I hope this helps!
The arm is definitely something you need to fix. It looks wobbly right now (and it shouldn't!), my suggestion to fix that up is to emphasis the elbow a bit more and straighten it out. The glove and skin tones blend really easily on my monitor, so I also added some contrast to make the glove more obvious. I poofed the dress, but that's how I see Peach's design, feel free to keep the original if you like that better. The face looks "wrong" but I can't quite say exactly why. I tried to make the eyelashes noticeable, and I moved the nose up a bit. The overall effect is that her head is tilted upwards a tiny bit. I also sharpened her chin a bit by making it more of a corner where it should be; due to the size yours looks soft. Finally I darkened the lips to make them more noticeable. You're doing a good job so far, I hope this helps!