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By yourself [Poem]
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10-01-2008, 10:35 AM (This post was last modified: 10-02-2008, 07:06 AM by LeleleleMAXIMUM.)
No rhyming at all is best. Rrrff Tongue

AAAA in general is not bad, but the last three lines, where you used the same word, ruins it.

Plus I'm not sure what "Cry out in impotence" means.
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By yourself [Poem] - by Zee - 09-21-2008, 04:25 AM
RE: By yourself [Poem] - by Goemar - 09-24-2008, 08:02 AM
RE: By yourself [Poem] - by Zee - 09-26-2008, 01:11 PM
RE: By yourself [Poem] - by LeleleleMAXIMUM - 10-01-2008, 10:35 AM
RE: By yourself [Poem] - by Zee - 10-01-2008, 10:41 AM
RE: By yourself [Poem] - by LeleleleMAXIMUM - 10-02-2008, 07:05 AM
RE: By yourself [Poem] - by Zee - 11-13-2008, 10:43 AM
RE: By yourself [Poem] - by Oddball - 11-13-2008, 08:50 PM

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