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[GAME][IN DEVELOPMENT] Sharkaiger (formerly Shark Week)
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everything looks great but i have one MAJOR complain -- all your sprites and artwork in general are clean and animated well, but everything is IMPOSSIBLE to read in the screens you've posted. the background is WAY too vibrant, and the screen resolution is way too small

in speedy sidescrollers like this one, being bale to see every object in play is crucial, as well is being able to IDENTIFY every object in play. i honestly can not see either, at quick glances.

first of all your backgrounds and environment in general are WAY too busy, and have the same color schemes as your objects. you need to dull and desaturate the colors in the scenery to differentiate between the two

secondly the business of the foreground AND background needs to be heavily tweaked, but as you said, you are looking for help in that area so i'll not crit you there

but this will seriously make or break your really promising looking game here, make sure you fix this ASAP! wouldn't want to let such a visually pleasing game ironically kill itself because of it's own visuals
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RE: [GAME][IN DEVELOPMENT] Shark Week - by Kairos - 10-16-2010, 07:17 PM
RE: [GAME][IN DEVELOPMENT] Shark Week - by Key - 10-17-2010, 12:45 AM
RE: [GAME][IN DEVELOPMENT] Shark Week - by Kosheh - 10-17-2010, 06:31 AM
RE: [GAME][IN DEVELOPMENT] Shark Week - by Kosheh - 10-17-2010, 09:19 PM
RE: [GAME][IN DEVELOPMENT] Shark Week - by Gwen - 10-24-2010, 06:26 PM
RE: [GAME][IN DEVELOPMENT] Shark Week - by Gors - 11-09-2010, 09:25 AM
RE: [GAME][IN DEVELOPMENT] Shark Week - by Gors - 11-10-2010, 03:30 PM
RE: [GAME][IN DEVELOPMENT] Shark Week - by Shawn - 11-10-2010, 05:14 PM
RE: [GAME][IN DEVELOPMENT] Shark Week - by Key - 11-11-2010, 07:14 PM
RE: [GAME][IN DEVELOPMENT] Shark Week - by Key - 11-11-2010, 08:22 PM
RE: [GAME][IN DEVELOPMENT] Shark Week - by Key - 11-11-2010, 09:02 PM
RE: [GAME][IN DEVELOPMENT] Shark Week - by Shawn - 12-07-2010, 12:05 PM
RE: [GAME][IN DEVELOPMENT] Shark Week - by Kitsu - 12-10-2010, 02:21 AM
RE: [GAME][IN DEVELOPMENT] Shark Week - by Gaia - 12-17-2010, 01:35 PM
RE: [GAME][IN DEVELOPMENT] Shark Week - by Gaia - 12-17-2010, 06:20 PM
RE: [GAME][IN DEVELOPMENT] Shark Week - by Kairos - 12-23-2010, 02:15 PM
RE: [GAME][IN DEVELOPMENT] Shark Week - by HAHAHA - 01-22-2011, 07:16 PM
RE: [GAME][IN DEVELOPMENT] Shark Week - by NJB123 - 01-26-2011, 05:11 AM
RE: [GAME][IN DEVELOPMENT] Shark Week - by water dog - 01-31-2011, 10:45 PM
RE: [GAME][IN DEVELOPMENT] Shark Week - by Elyk - 02-19-2011, 09:25 PM
RE: [GAME][IN DEVELOPMENT] Shark Week - by TPoe - 02-11-2011, 02:23 AM
RE: [GAME][IN DEVELOPMENT] Shark Week - by Kitsu - 02-10-2011, 09:29 PM
RE: [GAME][IN DEVELOPMENT] Shark Week - by thernz - 02-11-2011, 08:42 PM
RE: [GAME][IN DEVELOPMENT] Shark Week - by tgb621 - 02-13-2011, 12:41 PM
RE: [GAME][IN DEVELOPMENT] Shark Week - by Gors - 03-15-2011, 11:08 PM
RE: [GAME][IN DEVELOPMENT] Shark Week - by Shawn - 03-16-2011, 09:45 PM
RE: [GAME][IN DEVELOPMENT] Shark Week - by Adam - 03-17-2011, 06:31 PM
RE: [GAME][IN DEVELOPMENT] Shark Week - by Link - 04-30-2011, 07:08 PM

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