Your palette seems to be suboptimal; the shoes and darker skin tones are similar enough that they can share colors. The eyes are also different from the hair, so you should use the same color for both. The skin tones could use more contrast too.
The posing of the feet needs to be fixed. The bottom part of the leg on the right should be more inward (I imagine he's leaning forward slightly), and the left foot should twist more to the left. The arms need more definition, right now they're very blob-like. I don't know how much you can edit and keep it readable, but I would definitely suggest making the thumb on the left fist visible (I almost confused the hand for the shoulder :/)
I hope you don't mind me doing an edit for this (I'll post it when I'm done
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EDIT:![[Image: gohanedit.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fimg.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fv396%2Fx0_000%2Fgohanedit.png&hash=809571fbdd00feffeea2fbec2fdab0ab)
Mostly fiddled with the pants/leg posing and some minor changes to the face/left fist. You can see I tried to mess around with the right arm but I gave up for now so yeah XP. I also edited your palette and removed a few near duplicate colors.
The posing of the feet needs to be fixed. The bottom part of the leg on the right should be more inward (I imagine he's leaning forward slightly), and the left foot should twist more to the left. The arms need more definition, right now they're very blob-like. I don't know how much you can edit and keep it readable, but I would definitely suggest making the thumb on the left fist visible (I almost confused the hand for the shoulder :/)
I hope you don't mind me doing an edit for this (I'll post it when I'm done
)EDIT:
Mostly fiddled with the pants/leg posing and some minor changes to the face/left fist. You can see I tried to mess around with the right arm but I gave up for now so yeah XP. I also edited your palette and removed a few near duplicate colors.