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(09-09-2010, 05:28 PM)Ego Wrote: [Image: GrayingTowerAloneOnTheSea.png]

I don't like how the water is: it looks.... solid. You need to make the waves more smooth; you need to make it to 'flow'. Same with the foam. Also, since the water is hitting the obelisk with power, then you need make the water splash: draw several drops of water in the air.

the lightning should highlight the clouds around them because it is a lightsource on its own.
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Ocean Monolith - by Ego - 09-09-2010, 05:28 PM
RE: Ocean Monolith - by GrooveMan.exe - 09-09-2010, 05:37 PM
RE: Ocean Monolith - by Davy Jones - 09-09-2010, 05:48 PM
RE: Ocean Monolith - by Proton - 09-09-2010, 06:10 PM
RE: Ocean Monolith - by Ego - 09-09-2010, 06:04 PM
RE: Ocean Monolith - by GrooveMan.exe - 09-11-2010, 08:55 PM
RE: Ocean Monolith - by Davy Jones - 09-09-2010, 06:42 PM
RE: Ocean Monolith - by Badassbill - 09-09-2010, 06:49 PM
RE: Ocean Monolith - by Ego - 09-09-2010, 09:48 PM
RE: Ocean Monolith - by Gors - 09-10-2010, 07:22 AM
RE: Ocean Monolith - by triptych - 09-10-2010, 02:54 PM
RE: Ocean Monolith - by Ego - 09-10-2010, 06:20 PM
RE: Ocean Monolith - by Ego - 09-11-2010, 10:49 PM

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