Pretty much what CeeY said.
When you're working with something so simple as GM, you have really no excuse to make a game so weak. It really shows that you're either not trying/caring or you just aren't familiar with the GM system. Try making a few simple game just to get the hang of it before you try to show off.
Also, tSR isn't really a place to get crit on a game as much as it is for sprites. Try PxC or TIGS, they won't judge a game by it's graphics as much.
When you're working with something so simple as GM, you have really no excuse to make a game so weak. It really shows that you're either not trying/caring or you just aren't familiar with the GM system. Try making a few simple game just to get the hang of it before you try to show off.
Also, tSR isn't really a place to get crit on a game as much as it is for sprites. Try PxC or TIGS, they won't judge a game by it's graphics as much.