[art] a blonde etna that rollerblades

[Chutzpar]

She has a teeeeeny ribcage

I just spent ages pulling my legs up to my chest to mimic her pose to work out what was wrong, you realise. At first I thought her body was too long, but now it just looks like her chest / shoulders are to small for her body.

Try extending the canvas and redrawing her legs with their current proportions, but in a standing pose. I guarantee she'll seem strangely bottom-heavy, and not in a natural "pear shape" kinda way either.

The hair also seems a little uneven to me - the pigtail that's further away looks bigger and fuller, while the one closest to us looks kinda small and thin by comparison. Perspective dictates it should be the other way around, if anything! :X