07-07-2010, 02:58 PM
haha going to 4chan for criticism this is hillarious
now, what you really have to do here is to redraw that face, it's so ugly. plus UGH that nose. hang on let me redraw it in my own style to show you what i mean
no jk, this is pretty good. I can't think of what to criticize here ummm let me see
really, the only things that i can critique are very minor, for instance, her left (our right) ear doesn't have any shading, i also feel like you could have added some small shadows on her face (mostly in the area between her eye and her eyebrow), i'd also add more contrast and light on that wing of hers, and more shinyness on the acessories she wears on her ears, hair, and neck.
but those are very minor, specially when you consider that you did this whole thing in just a couple of hours! this is really really good. I like the pose (I don't think it's too stiff as you say it) and the shading and colours are really good. keep doing more of these
now, what you really have to do here is to redraw that face, it's so ugly. plus UGH that nose. hang on let me redraw it in my own style to show you what i mean
no jk, this is pretty good. I can't think of what to criticize here ummm let me see
really, the only things that i can critique are very minor, for instance, her left (our right) ear doesn't have any shading, i also feel like you could have added some small shadows on her face (mostly in the area between her eye and her eyebrow), i'd also add more contrast and light on that wing of hers, and more shinyness on the acessories she wears on her ears, hair, and neck.
but those are very minor, specially when you consider that you did this whole thing in just a couple of hours! this is really really good. I like the pose (I don't think it's too stiff as you say it) and the shading and colours are really good. keep doing more of these
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