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Maneko's Unusual Sprites
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The major problem here maybe isn't Misty, but more like 'do something else'. I know, those sprites are good as they are, but don't be afraid to experiment. Make different things, use different techniques, etc. That's your major flaw imo.

You have talent, but everything in this thread is Earthbound/NGP/Catgirls so it's kinda predictable and usual of yours (ironically).

Another thing, saying that only ONE comment was useful is bullshit. Most C+Cs in this site come bluntly so you'll need to actually use your brain to solve your problems, which is a better way of improving than spoonfeeding every single flaw for you (everything I said is well-covered in this thread http://www.spriters-resource.com/communi...?tid=13748 ; read it if you hasn't yet). So don't disregard them just because they don't have a single instance of sugarcoating.


Now, the criticism part: the sprites are better viewed in 1x because it's the native size. 2x makes finding readability issues in your sprite harder. Other than that, it's fine.

About NGP Misty, you should make her smaller than the average NGP sprites because, well, she's 12 and most characters in that size are (or look) older than her. Other criticisms still stand valid, though.
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Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 08-12-2009, 09:15 AM
RE: Maneko's Earthbound styled sprites. - by Dazz - 08-12-2009, 11:52 AM
RE: Maneko's Earthbound styled sprites. - by Ton - 08-13-2009, 09:46 AM
RE: Maneko's Earthbound styled sprites. - by Ton - 08-16-2009, 01:03 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 08-17-2009, 01:38 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Ton - 08-17-2009, 02:26 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Saguchi - 08-17-2009, 02:38 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 08-17-2009, 02:45 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 09-23-2009, 12:26 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Ton - 09-23-2009, 03:22 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 09-23-2009, 03:41 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Ton - 09-23-2009, 04:01 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Vipershark - 09-23-2009, 09:45 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by LeleleleMAXIMUM - 09-24-2009, 12:18 AM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Mr. Sprinkler - 09-24-2009, 12:25 AM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 09-24-2009, 01:31 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Ton - 09-24-2009, 08:23 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Sengir - 09-24-2009, 11:08 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 09-25-2009, 07:49 AM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 10-13-2009, 05:46 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Omega - 10-13-2009, 08:13 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 10-14-2009, 11:02 AM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Ton - 10-14-2009, 11:06 AM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 10-14-2009, 11:25 AM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Chaoxys - 10-14-2009, 05:38 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 10-14-2009, 06:50 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Chaoxys - 10-14-2009, 11:32 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 10-15-2009, 05:30 AM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 10-27-2009, 06:27 AM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Helmo - 10-27-2009, 07:03 AM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 10-27-2009, 07:47 AM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 11-17-2009, 12:56 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Ton - 11-17-2009, 01:14 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 11-17-2009, 01:30 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by PrettyNier - 11-17-2009, 02:00 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 11-17-2009, 02:08 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 11-17-2009, 09:16 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 12-26-2009, 04:59 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Ton - 12-27-2009, 01:40 AM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Cobalt Blue - 12-27-2009, 03:56 AM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 12-27-2009, 10:38 AM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Cobalt Blue - 12-27-2009, 12:20 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Star56 - 12-27-2009, 06:46 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 12-28-2009, 01:10 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 01-01-2010, 07:52 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by bahamut920 - 01-02-2010, 01:55 AM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 01-02-2010, 07:41 AM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Cobalt Blue - 01-02-2010, 10:39 AM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 01-02-2010, 01:38 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Cobalt Blue - 01-02-2010, 02:19 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 01-02-2010, 03:21 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 01-02-2010, 04:14 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Cobalt Blue - 01-03-2010, 03:01 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 05-07-2010, 08:27 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Gwen - 05-07-2010, 11:24 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Cobalt Blue - 05-08-2010, 03:39 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 05-08-2010, 03:52 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Cobalt Blue - 05-08-2010, 05:54 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 05-08-2010, 06:09 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 06-27-2010, 10:58 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Iceman404 - 06-29-2010, 08:11 AM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Gors - 06-28-2010, 01:23 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 06-28-2010, 03:19 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Cobalt Blue - 06-28-2010, 03:20 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by PrettyNier - 06-28-2010, 05:37 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 06-28-2010, 06:05 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by PrettyNier - 06-28-2010, 06:38 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Cobalt Blue - 06-28-2010, 07:42 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 06-28-2010, 08:06 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Cobalt Blue - 06-28-2010, 08:47 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Gors - 06-29-2010, 06:41 AM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Shawn - 06-28-2010, 08:44 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 06-28-2010, 09:09 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Cobalt Blue - 06-28-2010, 09:39 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Cobalt Blue - 06-29-2010, 08:47 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Iceman404 - 06-29-2010, 08:48 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Cobalt Blue - 06-29-2010, 08:54 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Proton - 06-30-2010, 11:39 AM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 06-29-2010, 10:13 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Iceman404 - 06-30-2010, 09:14 AM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by PrettyNier - 06-29-2010, 11:50 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Cobalt Blue - 06-30-2010, 01:30 AM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Lemon - 06-30-2010, 01:37 AM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Shawn - 06-30-2010, 07:24 AM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Gors - 06-30-2010, 10:49 AM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 06-30-2010, 12:52 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Gors - 06-30-2010, 01:19 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 06-30-2010, 01:39 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Gors - 06-30-2010, 02:05 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by PrettyNier - 06-30-2010, 03:03 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Maneko - 06-30-2010, 04:05 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by PrettyNier - 06-30-2010, 04:13 PM
RE: Maneko's Unusual Sprites - by Alpha Six - 06-30-2010, 04:13 PM

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