Porky

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I got some crits to say about Pokey.


Uploaded with ImageShack.us The front head troubled me so I tried to make a new one. Even expermiented with a different pallete. I shall explain what I saw was wrong: The hair looked really messy and different compared to the diagonal version, I believe his cheeks should puff out more since he's smiling, and his nose I thought should stick up more.

If you don't like the pallete ignore it, but I'd like to say some things about the current pallete I noticed. The skin color and some of the mouth outline colors change throughout some poses. The front head has a different shading pallete than the diagonal head. Also, some colors can be replaced with other colors to make it look less messy and etc. On a side note, the robot looks amazing. Keep going you guys!