(Issue 208!) JournalistMan.exe

[Rosencrantz]

well, I can help with some hardxXxcore proofreading if you're going to fix up your article~



4 things that need to be included in more games...:
1) Customisation (should probably be spelled "Customization")
"...customised..." --- shouldn't it be "customized"?

3) Local Multiplayer
"But now consoles have integrated internet, a lot of games publishers..." --- should probably be "But now that consoles have integrated internet, a lot of game publishers..."
"...and has it's place..." --- and has it is place

Blur:
"All the real world locations and cars to please the realistic racing enthusiast,..." --- fragment :C
"With both local and online multiplayer, what's not to" --- cut off

NMH2: Deadly Struggle
"...with a beam-katana; once the #1 Ranked assassin in the US until he retired to watch anime and wrestling DVDs" --- this is just awkward to me :/ Maybe get rid of the semicolon and switch in "who was" ?

Sin and Punishment
"...nonesnsical plot..." --- small typo

Fist of the North Star
"...Fist of the North Star..." --- italics problem

"The transition to 3Dhas..." --- 3Dhas

"...ecellently..."
"...persuade you to give it wa watch..." --- small typos here too

"...rediculous opening." --- shouldn't it be "ridiculous"?



And this is all I'm seeing that you should look into fixing. I've noticed a few semicolons here and there that could easily be removed, but they're probably just as fine where they are now