Marth

[Tarvonas]

The shading and structure are all bad. All of it. The sprite needs to be redone, not... resized and edited off the original.

Hmm?

It doesn't really help when all you say is "Do it again" without specifying what exactly is wrong with it. I can't really pin-point the wrongs with the structure... I can see the shading is a little off, and I'll fix that, but what exactly in the structure don't you like?

I know I'm not a good spriter, but if you don't like it, just sprecify so I (or someone else) can make it better.

Actually, when I come to think about it, the shading isn't all that bad. When I was working with it, I put him alongside the other sprites in the line-up and frankly, the shading styles were very similar. I tried to make the style as similar as I could without screwing it up majorly, but nonetheless, I'll go through it again and try to make some fixes.

Besides, I actually ended up changing the sprite quite drastically. I didn't just do a re-colour, because I did find multiple things that didn't fit the style. I pretty much completely re-did the lower body, and everything else went through a lot of editing to match how he actually appears in Brawl.

I didn't however do much to the cape (except re-clour it and do a few minor edits). I'm just bad at capes full stop.

Anyway, I'm goin' off my rocket here.. I'll work some more on the sprite now, and post an update later.