Hey there, I just joined. =D
I'm trying to get some crits on these:
![[Image: breathingnewhair2.gif]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fimg130.imageshack.us%2Fimg130%2F6370%2Fbreathingnewhair2.gif&hash=cf57e6680c5b6f4ec472c2a3fb4de930)
![[Image: breathing5.gif]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fimg85.imageshack.us%2Fimg85%2F8086%2Fbreathing5.gif&hash=d3c0950cee3ef2ac63f3a1bc8ea904e5)
![[Image: running2.gif]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fimg64.imageshack.us%2Fimg64%2F3850%2Frunning2.gif&hash=7bac104c69291bfaf026caac8bfd9f60)
![[Image: kickingcombo123v2.gif]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fimg689.imageshack.us%2Fimg689%2F5035%2Fkickingcombo123v2.gif&hash=1e71aaab6ef183e054ad84ff12933340)
![[Image: x17shooting1.gif]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fimg519.imageshack.us%2Fimg519%2F7603%2Fx17shooting1.gif&hash=1ee41db7bcc0838448e3258df7aaa8bf)
![[Image: wrathidle.gif]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fimg693.imageshack.us%2Fimg693%2F58%2Fwrathidle.gif&hash=b397999ed80fc783e9c9bb901b800feb)
I want to improve these as much as possible so be as harsh as needed. I figure if a lot people can point out the flaws I'll know what to work on better. I'd also appreciate more constructive feedback than anything.
And I know the kicking frames don't have any shading, I wanted C+C on the design first.
I'm trying to get some crits on these:
![[Image: breathingnewhair2.gif]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fimg130.imageshack.us%2Fimg130%2F6370%2Fbreathingnewhair2.gif&hash=cf57e6680c5b6f4ec472c2a3fb4de930)
![[Image: breathing5.gif]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fimg85.imageshack.us%2Fimg85%2F8086%2Fbreathing5.gif&hash=d3c0950cee3ef2ac63f3a1bc8ea904e5)
![[Image: running2.gif]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fimg64.imageshack.us%2Fimg64%2F3850%2Frunning2.gif&hash=7bac104c69291bfaf026caac8bfd9f60)
![[Image: kickingcombo123v2.gif]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fimg689.imageshack.us%2Fimg689%2F5035%2Fkickingcombo123v2.gif&hash=1e71aaab6ef183e054ad84ff12933340)
![[Image: x17shooting1.gif]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fimg519.imageshack.us%2Fimg519%2F7603%2Fx17shooting1.gif&hash=1ee41db7bcc0838448e3258df7aaa8bf)
![[Image: wrathidle.gif]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fimg693.imageshack.us%2Fimg693%2F58%2Fwrathidle.gif&hash=b397999ed80fc783e9c9bb901b800feb)
I want to improve these as much as possible so be as harsh as needed. I figure if a lot people can point out the flaws I'll know what to work on better. I'd also appreciate more constructive feedback than anything.
And I know the kicking frames don't have any shading, I wanted C+C on the design first.