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03-07-2010, 12:56 PM
A lot of these are done very well, and yeah, they're very dark, but lots of poetry is these days.

I agree with 1up about the rhyming in the last one, however; you could make it seem a little less forced. Otherwise, keep it up, man.
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The Definitive Poem Thread of Kriven - by Kriven - 03-03-2010, 06:06 PM
RE: The Definitive Poem Thread of Kriven - by Adam - 03-07-2010, 12:56 PM

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