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03-07-2010, 12:12 PM (This post was last modified: 03-07-2010, 12:12 PM by triptych.)
the rhyming in that last poem comes off as so forced it's almost cringe-worthy
it's like



i'm not completely against trying to make your poems rhyme, but holy shit man
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The Definitive Poem Thread of Kriven - by Kriven - 03-03-2010, 06:06 PM
RE: The Definitive Poem Thread of Kriven - by triptych - 03-07-2010, 12:12 PM

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