I really like the first part. The rest of it kinda, well, sucks. The rythem is inconsistent and it stops rhyming half way through.
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Coldest Nightmare - by Kriven - 01-31-2010, 08:51 PM
RE: Coldest Nightmare - by Cshad - 01-31-2010, 09:49 PM
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