08-13-2009, 10:31 PM
where the HELL is my ODST helmet at?
and my Scout, for that matter?
anyway, that first Big Daddy sprite (the one next to the Big Sister) is pretty good
but the Big Sister's torso is too blocky,
second Big Daddy could be in a better pose than the whole "arms stretched out" thing
Little Sister is waaaay too blocky (and the shoulders are too big)
Spartan heads are fine (although Security's visor is a little short and the EOD's eyes could spread out a bit more), but the bodies are extremely blocky
lineart could be a little cleaner with the two monsters, but idk what to exactly crit :<
and the Wii is pretty good, but it could use some AA-ing
and my Scout, for that matter?
anyway, that first Big Daddy sprite (the one next to the Big Sister) is pretty good
but the Big Sister's torso is too blocky,
second Big Daddy could be in a better pose than the whole "arms stretched out" thing
Little Sister is waaaay too blocky (and the shoulders are too big)
Spartan heads are fine (although Security's visor is a little short and the EOD's eyes could spread out a bit more), but the bodies are extremely blocky
lineart could be a little cleaner with the two monsters, but idk what to exactly crit :<
and the Wii is pretty good, but it could use some AA-ing
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