08-02-2009, 09:48 PM
The viking scene needs to be re-touched. I'm looking at the viking guy and noticed that that's the head you drew a while back and lookg like it was just thrown on there for the hell of it and it does not fit. If the head is really supposed to be there, the shading needs to be looked at again. Its just kinda random and messy, like there was not enough time spent on it. I'm having troble making out the horns since the way you shaded them does not really help understand the shade but just make it harder to read. His "body" looks odd too. It's just a boring mass of feathers that give no real shape the whatever physical mass the viking may or may not have. The pose is also really boring. It looks like a storms brewing and hes just sitting/standing/something there staring. Strike a pose, be exciting, Yearrgh!
The dragon's head wip is really kinda ugly. Sorry to say that, its just the overall drawing. You're trying to draw both sides of his face when you should only be giving the view of his face in the direction that the ship is pointing (speaking of that, I cannot teall which direction it is facing). His facial construction looks a bit messed up to. It looks like one side of his face is being shoved up with the other side is looking straight forward. Oy. I don't think you should use the same color as the wood for the dragon. I think you should use a seperate color or remover the two grey lines (are they gonna be chains?) that suggest the dragon was not initially part of the ship. If you do that, I think you should slowly have the scales dissappear into the wood. It would look cool~
The water looks really boring so far. I dunno if its the colors or what but they just dont strike me as interesting. I think you should make the water lines a little bit less thick and add just a little bit more detail to the WIP I'm seeing right now. Idk its probably too early to tell. I hope you're not going to draw the clouds in a really lazy way again. Really, the clouds are just lines in a bunch of other colors in the Bridge and Mountain scene you had previously shown. You should have somehing different for different atmospheres.
The dragon's head wip is really kinda ugly. Sorry to say that, its just the overall drawing. You're trying to draw both sides of his face when you should only be giving the view of his face in the direction that the ship is pointing (speaking of that, I cannot teall which direction it is facing). His facial construction looks a bit messed up to. It looks like one side of his face is being shoved up with the other side is looking straight forward. Oy. I don't think you should use the same color as the wood for the dragon. I think you should use a seperate color or remover the two grey lines (are they gonna be chains?) that suggest the dragon was not initially part of the ship. If you do that, I think you should slowly have the scales dissappear into the wood. It would look cool~
The water looks really boring so far. I dunno if its the colors or what but they just dont strike me as interesting. I think you should make the water lines a little bit less thick and add just a little bit more detail to the WIP I'm seeing right now. Idk its probably too early to tell. I hope you're not going to draw the clouds in a really lazy way again. Really, the clouds are just lines in a bunch of other colors in the Bridge and Mountain scene you had previously shown. You should have somehing different for different atmospheres.