Fantasy Smash Project 2.5

[Omegakyogre]

Yeah, it needs work. Her tail is pillow-shaded, for one thing. You need some hue-shifting on her hair, and the shine needs fixing as well. The fact that you don't have any shading (rather, you have lighting and an outline) on the hair gives it a pillow-shaded feel to it, as well. Her arms aren't shaded consistently and they both are shaped weirdly. Her upper torso is lacking depth, as well.
The most important problem I see is the lineart. The way you have it, no amount of shading can un-flatten things like the bottom half of her tail and her hair.