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(07-23-2009, 07:46 AM)DigiTamer Metaru Wrote: [Image: 33kw1tf.png]
fixed some elements such as the lenght of the right foot, the placement of the left one. is he suposed to be using a strong tan? if not, you should try to use a bit less saturated color for the skin.
Thanks! The reason he's so tan is because I'm horrible at picking out a skin palette. They are always either too tan or too yellow. Thanks for the help though.


@ JosephSeraph -
Thanks for the crit. Are you saying I should use less colors in the shading? I've been afraid I was overdoing the colors at points as I'm using 5 shades per color, 2 mainly for outlines. Are you saying it's a good idea to cut that down to 4 or even 3?


Here are some animations. They don't have the fixes that you did, Digitamer, that I'm implementing into them now, but I'm just posting them for the sake of judging the animation:

Running:
[Image: donnerrun.gif]

Shooting/Reloading "Assailant":
[Image: donnerreloadassailant.gif]

Shooting/Reloading "Slaughter":
[Image: donnerreloadslaughter.gif]

Throwing a Grenade:
[Image: donnergrenadethrow.gif]

Popping out of cover and shooting:
[Image: donnerexitcoverandshoot.gif]
I need some crit so it looks more like he's crouching in cover. I think it's mainly the depth doesn't look right, as the back leg needs to look more behind the front. Should I make it darker?

Thanks.
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A Character for a game - by Alex - 07-22-2009, 05:40 PM
RE: A Character for a game - by Cobalt Blue - 07-23-2009, 07:46 AM
RE: A Character for a game - by Alex - 07-23-2009, 11:28 AM
RE: A Character for a game - by JosephSeraph - 07-23-2009, 08:46 AM
RE: A Character for a game - by Cobalt Blue - 07-23-2009, 04:36 PM
RE: A Character for a game - by Alex - 07-23-2009, 09:47 PM
RE: A Character for a game - by JosephSeraph - 07-23-2009, 06:49 PM
RE: A Character for a game - by JosephSeraph - 07-24-2009, 07:45 AM
RE: A Character for a game - by Alex - 07-24-2009, 09:34 AM
RE: A Character for a game - by Alex - 08-05-2009, 09:49 AM

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