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my first edit-EVER
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It's a minor edit, more a recolor.
It's not entirely terrible though, I mean at least the colors are alright.

He just looks too much like Sonic. Your job is to make people think "whoa it's Shadow" instead of "whoa it's Sonic cosplaying as Shadow."

[Image: ShTH_Shadow.png]

1. Longer spikes. Mind your linework, don't make his spikes look jagged.
2. Make the eyes more menacing. Sonic's are too friendly.
3. Make his chest hair look like hair, not a white triangle. Smile
4. Red stripe on the middle of his head.

Not bad for a first. Welcome to the forums. Smile
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Messages In This Thread
my first edit-EVER - by knucks - 07-14-2009, 07:32 AM
RE: my first edit-EVER - by LeleleleMAXIMUM - 07-14-2009, 07:48 AM
RE: my first edit-EVER - by knucks - 07-14-2009, 07:50 AM
RE: my first edit-EVER - by LeleleleMAXIMUM - 07-14-2009, 07:53 AM
RE: my first edit-EVER - by knucks - 07-14-2009, 08:01 AM
RE: my first edit-EVER - by LeleleleMAXIMUM - 07-14-2009, 08:02 AM
RE: my first edit-EVER - by knucks - 07-14-2009, 08:06 AM
RE: my first edit-EVER - by LeleleleMAXIMUM - 07-14-2009, 08:09 AM
RE: my first edit-EVER - by knucks - 07-14-2009, 08:47 AM
RE: my first edit-EVER - by Cobalt Blue - 07-14-2009, 09:15 AM
RE: my first edit-EVER - by knucks - 07-14-2009, 10:01 AM
RE: my first edit-EVER - by Chdonga - 07-14-2009, 09:59 AM
RE: my first edit-EVER - by Boo - 07-14-2009, 10:55 AM
RE: my first edit-EVER - by Ton - 07-14-2009, 10:56 AM
RE: my first edit-EVER - by nairenu - 07-15-2009, 05:23 PM
RE: my first edit-EVER - by DioShiba - 07-15-2009, 06:51 PM
RE: my first edit-EVER - by Vipershark - 07-15-2009, 10:16 PM
RE: my first edit-EVER - by Smash - 07-15-2009, 10:56 PM
RE: my first edit-EVER - by knucks - 07-17-2009, 08:48 AM
RE: my first edit-EVER - by Vipershark - 07-17-2009, 10:46 AM
RE: my first edit-EVER - by arĂ¼n - 07-17-2009, 10:56 AM

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