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Chloe Valens, ToE style
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hmm, her face looks messy: there are a lot of stray pixels there. Some of the colors clash, principally red. I think it should be paler so it goes well with other colors. Also, some parts, especially the legs, are jaggy.

The way she swings the sword is unnatural and the motion blur could be better; Antialiase it and remove the outlines.
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Chloe Valens, ToE style - by halfangelfreak - 07-13-2009, 03:41 PM
RE: Chloe Valens, ToE style - by Gors - 07-13-2009, 04:06 PM
RE: Chloe Valens, ToE style - by halfangelfreak - 07-13-2009, 05:28 PM
RE: Chloe Valens, ToE style - by Cobalt Blue - 07-14-2009, 09:24 AM

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