07-01-2008, 08:31 PM
Cool yoshi, honestly, you made it look worse, and juding by the color choice you used and the way you shaded it, you dont know anymore about M&L than this guy, so really, shut up.
Now, for the original sprite, you have no depth, or shaidng which is your main problem. The light scource comes from above the sprite, use mario for reference. Now, your tecturing is quite random, try something more simple, as it appears you cant texture quite yet. If you choose instead to pursue it, try looking up tecture bodies to use as refernce for this. Also, be sure to keep a solid (or near black) outline throughout the entire sprite to ensure its more m&L style. If you just beginning, this style isnt for you.
The teeth look gradient, instead of using lines, use a trick called aa to mold the teeth to the black. Tecturing doesent need to go on the hands either.
Now, for the original sprite, you have no depth, or shaidng which is your main problem. The light scource comes from above the sprite, use mario for reference. Now, your tecturing is quite random, try something more simple, as it appears you cant texture quite yet. If you choose instead to pursue it, try looking up tecture bodies to use as refernce for this. Also, be sure to keep a solid (or near black) outline throughout the entire sprite to ensure its more m&L style. If you just beginning, this style isnt for you.
The teeth look gradient, instead of using lines, use a trick called aa to mold the teeth to the black. Tecturing doesent need to go on the hands either.