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Neo Kirby X!
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You have to get a proper comic flow going. Don't do things without giving explanations. Also, if you have to explain the comic OUTSIDE of the comic itself, then it isn't exactly a good comic.

Also, try and use bigger frames.

And NEVER use text emotes in your dialogues.

And also try and make better punchlines :<
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Neo Kirby X! - by kirbyace - 06-29-2008, 03:41 PM
RE: Neo Kirby X! - by Rakia - 06-29-2008, 03:52 PM
RE: Neo Kirby X! - by Rosencrantz - 06-29-2008, 05:58 PM
RE: Neo Kirby X! - by Afr0Blu3 - 06-30-2008, 06:10 AM
RE: Neo Kirby X! - by TPoe - 07-09-2008, 06:04 AM
RE: Neo Kirby X! - by Colton - 07-09-2008, 07:05 AM
RE: Neo Kirby X! - by Skink - 07-09-2008, 11:35 AM
RE: Neo Kirby X! - by Fireshock - 07-09-2008, 06:35 PM
RE: Neo Kirby X! - by kirbyace - 08-02-2008, 04:51 PM
RE: Neo Kirby X! - by Kairos - 08-03-2008, 12:26 AM
RE: Neo Kirby X! - by Boo - 08-02-2008, 10:08 PM

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