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Long Time no See!
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(05-14-2009, 10:35 AM)Mabelma Wrote: Here's the newst update for now. I have redife all of the lines and I have taken out the celtic spiral. Please give me some C+C guys. The colors are just to say which thing is which.
[Image: SwordCircled-1.png]
It looks like the sword is not straight on the side where its not suppose to be sharp.
The sky is wrong blue colour, use light blue that almost fits white if your not trying to make it look like an evil sky otherwise mix blue with a red colour it would make it look nice, like sunset for example to make it look evil just don't use too much yellow for that.
The handles sword on the tip of it is ugly, make a more unique design and in larger size a little bit, plus the handle is too small compared to the sword, give it an angle aswell.
There is soo much to comment that it almost feels like not commenting at all.
Edit: by the way the clouds suck too, make them have a misty look.
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Long Time no See! - by Mabelma - 05-13-2009, 06:24 PM
RE: Long Time no See! - by Mabelma - 05-14-2009, 10:35 AM
RE: Long Time no See! - by Mega_Virus - 05-15-2009, 03:39 AM
RE: Long Time no See! - by Cobalt Blue - 05-14-2009, 02:03 PM
RE: Long Time no See! - by Mabelma - 05-14-2009, 02:09 PM
RE: Long Time no See! - by Chris2Balls [:B] - 05-15-2009, 12:44 PM
RE: Long Time no See! - by Mabelma - 05-15-2009, 01:06 PM
RE: Long Time no See! - by Cobalt Blue - 05-15-2009, 05:00 PM
RE: Long Time no See! - by Mabelma - 05-15-2009, 05:50 PM
RE: Long Time no See! - by Cobalt Blue - 05-15-2009, 05:55 PM
RE: Long Time no See! - by Mabelma - 05-15-2009, 05:59 PM
RE: Long Time no See! - by Mabelma - 05-15-2009, 07:31 PM
RE: Long Time no See! - by Mabelma - 05-16-2009, 06:47 PM
RE: Long Time no See! - by Vipershark - 05-17-2009, 10:34 AM

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