Galaxy ball! / Game universes crossover

[Black Boo]

Yeah...overall, it's good, but I'm getting lost at points.

The structure is in need of a lot of work, but overall, nice.

But yeah, a lot of the characters need to be more in character. Biggest one I've seen is that Link's talking. TALKING. ...well...it'd be bland otherwise, so I'll let it slide.

I'm also starting to lose intrest though...I'm getting bored reading the training.