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Doodles and Finished Pieces
your main issue with your animation is lack of momentum, this showed in your pipe works sprites and they also show up here.

when making an animation, don't focus on making a ton of frames. Animation is not about making a frame, moving the subject 1 cm, and redraw another frame. Play with the timing and the subject's movement. Whereas you're making this:
Code:
O   O   O   O   O   O   O (where the O represents a place the object is in different frames)

you could be making this:

Code:
O     O    O  O  O O OO (In case, the object is slowing down)

The difference of the gaps between animations is what gives animation soul; otherwise they'll be smooth, but not realistic at all (sure, you aren't going for realism here, but this extra detail makes all the difference, trust me)
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Alright so today I will focus on frame timing as Gors (as well as Frar) pointed out.
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It's a little silly and messy but the main point here is to begin to understand the different times frames should last for.
I'll edit this post later as I make more.

or maybe i'll just make a topic.
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(07-17-2013, 05:18 PM)Trollerskates Wrote: [Image: tumblr_mq3ptcy90b1rkd41wo1_400.png]
Coloring practice for poops and giggles
I'm sure you're more worried about the colors, but the shadow the nose casts is in the opposite direction it should be CuteC
actually I don't really understand your lightsource.

I'd recommend making the shadow on the eyes have a pink or blue tint though--you rarely find completely desaturated shadows.
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Didn't feel like doing much of anything last night so I doodled a thing in SAI.

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You can thank the stabilizer for that. Shy
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Not using all the colours obviously just learning to work Sai

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