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Hello there I'm doing lady bow in mlss style now

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This is what I currently have Smile
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Loving it so far! Haven't seen much PM around here in a while!
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(07-25-2014, 01:30 PM)Ton Wrote: Loving it so far! Haven't seen much PM around here in a while!

Thank you very much for your reaction, do you have any suggestion how to improve it?
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Ohh! Paper Mario sprites! I've never liked Paper Mario as much as it's sequel (which I consider my favorite game of all time), but for me the ghost chapter was a favorite, holding up very well to it's sister chapter in Twilight Town.

As for Lady Bow, I think she holds up very well. But I have some nitpicks in some areas, so here's my edit:

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Some things to note are that Lady bow's eyes are a bit larger now. Her bows are a bit pointier and her tail has more of a curl to it to reflect her Paper Mario design. I also removed a layer of AA. I know her Paper Mario sprite had 2 layers of AA, but it was much larger and could use that much AA without looking blurry. Lastly, I brightened up the colors and flattened her eyeliner to 1 color to make it look cleaner.

Overall, there are less colors here so it'll be easier to add more frames. But I also can't help but think I've moved away from the ML:SS's cartoony style by changing up her face. If you agree, then I'd take the face you had on her overworld sprite and apply it to her battle sprite to give her a more consistent style.
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Nice edit. I'd say her belly still needs to be rounded off a bit.
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(07-30-2014, 12:57 AM)DragonDePlatino Wrote: Ohh! Paper Mario sprites! I've never liked Paper Mario as much as it's sequel (which I consider my favorite game of all time), but for me the ghost chapter was a favorite, holding up very well to it's sister chapter in Twilight Town.

As for Lady Bow, I think she holds up very well. But I have some nitpicks in some areas, so here's my edit:

[Image: ms__bowz_by_dragondeplatino-d7svuol.png]

Some things to note are that Lady bow's eyes are a bit larger now. Her bows are a bit pointier and her tail has more of a curl to it to reflect her Paper Mario design. I also removed a layer of AA. I know her Paper Mario sprite had 2 layers of AA, but it was much larger and could use that much AA without looking blurry. Lastly, I brightened up the colors and flattened her eyeliner to 1 color to make it look cleaner.

Overall, there are less colors here so it'll be easier to add more frames. But I also can't help but think I've moved away from the MLUnsureS's cartoony style by changing up her face. If you agree, then I'd take the face you had on her overworld sprite and apply it to her battle sprite to give her a more consistent style.

Thanks for the advice

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After messing around with lady bow I improved the bows, changed the arms and tail and made the eyes in the overworld and battle sprite more familiar to each other. However I don't understand why there can't be two layers of AA since boo has two layers of AA in mlss
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#7
I'm back with an improved lady bow spritesheet Big Grin

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I made the same changes in the base with all the other sprites. Also the animation to the base has been made, tired idle animation, laughing and defending has been added, talking and spook in overworld are done and the fan in five different directions

when I animate the fan it looks more like it's moving left and right instead of spinning and I don't know how to fix it
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#8
Once again I'm back!

Currently I'm trying to make more custom sprites instead of edited sprites. This is also the first time I'm not picking shades from other sprites, so I would like to receive critique on the colors and shades.

A while back I have played the Jak and Daxter games and I got in the mood to make sprites of them.

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The jak sprites in the center and on the top right are the most recent ones

This is what I have so far related to the jak and daxter sprites
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These sprites looks really good. I really like how Bow came out.

Also the Jax and Daxter sprites looks alright so far. The outline looks well done.
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(09-05-2016, 10:24 PM)AkumaTh Wrote: These sprites looks really good. I really like how Bow came out.

Also the Jax and Daxter sprites looks alright so far. The outline looks well done.

Thanks for the reaction Smile

I haven't worked on the lady bow spritesheet for a while and I didn't got much further.

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I'm going to add the colors on the jak and daxter sprites tomorrow
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#11
She's so close to done!
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(09-06-2016, 01:23 PM)Ton Wrote: She's so close to done!

I'm afraid Lady Bow is far from finished Sad 
By the way, is it possible to put unfinished sprite sheets on the website?
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Tess's fingerless gloves and shorts are changed from green to blue and the colors are added to Jak and Keira.
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Jak's face looks a bit squished.
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Jak's head is around the same size as his lady friend, right? Tess looks good though. Though I notice that she and Daxter is missing their tail.
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