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#46
(06-01-2010, 10:56 AM)Alpha Six Wrote: That head is awfully squished...

This. Almost looks like a sideways watermelon. Perhaps you should take a look at some of the other posts to find that his jaw shortness needs to be fixed. Yours looks pretty eliptical.
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#47
[Image: SnaketSR-1.png]?
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#48
Ugly. The face seems too stretched out and his nose looks ridiculous
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#49
Still really squished.
And why are his left and right legs on the same foreground line?
"Odd"?
"Odd" is Benjamin Franklin playing tether-ball with Van Helsing,
"Odd" is a big-toed tadpole taken by the tides of a dawn since past,
"ODD" is a 40-year-old senior officer who cries himself to sleep every night dreaming of a life on the road as a traveling naked condortionist, never returning home, never stopping, never breaking his stride!
...
Unless he saw a T.G.I Friday's. Fucking loves that place...
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#50
I believe I have it now.

[Image: SnaketSR-2.png]
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#51
His face. He looks *so* happy now! ^o^

... Yeah, that doesn't work. Maybe shrink his eyes a tiny bit. Refer to one of the earlier Marth sprites for a good eye size.
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#52
better?

[Image: SnaketSR-3.png]
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#53
A bit better, yes, though he still doesn't quite look as mean as he usually does.

Here a few edits to make him look a bit more fierce, as well as a few different edits to the face in an attempt to make him look even more like Snake.
[Image: tempoz.png]
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#54
(06-01-2010, 05:20 PM)Sploder Wrote: A bit better, yes, though he still doesn't quite look as mean as he usually does.

Here a few edits to make him look a bit more fierce, as well as a few different edits to the face in an attempt to make him look even more like Snake.
[Image: tempoz.png]
my fav is 3 so far the rest reminds me of chuck norris
#55
Exactly what I was thinking. Pull his eye forward a pixel.
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#56
Wow, so much work going on here to Snake, I like this!!! Big Grin
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#57
I think his chin should be squarer.
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#58
3 is definitely looking best to me. The eyes are bolder, but smaller. Nice. *No intentional rhymes there - Seriously*

And I really don't think the chin needs to be more square. I'm comparing the sprite to a picture of him in Brawl, and the head shape (especially around the chin) is fine.
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#60
Those eyes are staring at me through the computer on four. D :
I still think three is good, but you should incorporate the 'not having a perfect circle on the top of your head' idea to three.
"Odd"?
"Odd" is Benjamin Franklin playing tether-ball with Van Helsing,
"Odd" is a big-toed tadpole taken by the tides of a dawn since past,
"ODD" is a 40-year-old senior officer who cries himself to sleep every night dreaming of a life on the road as a traveling naked condortionist, never returning home, never stopping, never breaking his stride!
...
Unless he saw a T.G.I Friday's. Fucking loves that place...
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