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Need critique for sprite - Baegal - 11-26-2009
the sprite in my sig. I'm trying out a new style.
C+C?
I also need to know if I should add the body.
RE: Need critique for sprite - LeleleleMAXIMUM - 11-26-2009
Whoa, you made that? I thought it was an official GBA sprite.
The highlight on top of his head is too harsh. And the highlights on the side of his face are a bit jagged.
But overall, this is good.
RE: Need critique for sprite - Baegal - 11-26-2009
you mean on the hat? okay, ill fix it up when i have time
How about this? I also added the body
![[Image: Franforsig2.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi586.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fss301%2FBaegal%2FFranforsig2.png&hash=e8992e2b87c585573d35ecd0e4324304)
RE: Need critique for sprite - Eagallowglass - 11-26-2009
I agree with trout, try rounding the highlight on the top a little but still it's really good.
RE: Need critique for sprite - Sengir - 11-26-2009
actually, i think the top highlight is good now
still not digging side highlights, but everything else looks great
RE: Need critique for sprite - Baegal - 11-26-2009
well, it makes the hat stand out more. the white makes the black outline better. Plus, that's how it's originally drawn.
RE: Need critique for sprite - Sengir - 11-26-2009
I was refering to the aa on them, not their existence as a whole.
They could stand to be a bit smoother
RE: Need critique for sprite - Eagallowglass - 11-26-2009
I like the new one better and the body is interesting. Is this your own original work? Because it's very interesting and good.
RE: Need critique for sprite - Baegal - 11-26-2009
ah, I switched the colors. I ended up leaving only one because with two colors, it looked too smooth.
![[Image: Franforsig2-1.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi586.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fss301%2FBaegal%2FFranforsig2-1.png&hash=138af5457c6b18838fbbd21627586b94)
I also touched up on some minor details
(11-26-2009, 10:25 PM)Eagallowglass Wrote: Is this your own original work? Because it's very interesting and good.Well, its not my character, but I did make it from scratch.
RE: Need critique for sprite - Sengir - 11-26-2009
yes, looks better
RE: Need critique for sprite - Baegal - 11-26-2009
okay then. I guess i'll start animating soon.
this is where I'll really need help.
RE: Need critique for sprite - Cobalt Blue - 11-26-2009
before you start animating, could you try not using pure black for the outline? that way it would blend a bit more(thus making the transition between shading and lineart more soft) and probably look better.
RE: Need critique for sprite - Baegal - 11-27-2009
hm, I never thought of that. I was going for a GBA-ish not smooth style, but I'll try it.
I think this one's the winner.
![[Image: Franforsig3.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi586.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fss301%2FBaegal%2FFranforsig3.png&hash=b93b4a1f653d56d631b668dafba944fc)
After this, instead of animating it, I think I'm going to make another character.
I might atleast make an idle stance
RE: Need critique for sprite - Baegal - 12-04-2009
![[Image: Viperforsig1.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi586.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fss301%2FBaegal%2FViperforsig1.png&hash=36a60f2e325d71a5f2ea58e8add35bf9)
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RE: Need critique for sprite - Gors - 12-05-2009
I think that the side highlights in the first sprite could be less harsh and be more like the top one.
The small one is great, but it could use some AA to make it look like the first sprite.