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GX's WIPs - SpencerEX - 10-24-2009

hey guys I'm back with some new & old WIPs :p
M&L3 Morton & Jr Clown Car
[Image: Morton.png]
*Bowser Jr is by Devinchio & Ridge*
M&L3 Big Bomb-omb
[Image: ML3BigBomb-omb1.png]
M&L3 Virus
[Image: ML3Virus1.png]
M&L3 Penguin
[Image: ML3penguin21.png]
I am also working on the next M&L item sheet :p
C+C plz

RE: GX's WIPs - Baegal - 10-24-2009

the green part of the clown car needs to be less angular (shading too), and The big bomb-omb's mustache needs to stick out more, it looks a little odd :/

the bombombs my favorite so far :>

RE: GX's WIPs - A.J. Nitro - 10-24-2009

Morton looks kinda big, plus his legs are a bit too spread out.

RE: GX's WIPs - CeeY - 10-24-2009

I'm liking how Jr is coming out.

RE: GX's WIPs - Darking - 10-25-2009

Bowser Jr. is made by Devicho, if I'm not wrong.
Sorry, but the only thing I think looks goods are the King Bob-omb and the Viruses. Morton, the Baby Clown Copter and the Penguin looks odd.

RE: GX's WIPs - Davy Jones - 10-25-2009

The shading on the little clown car is not as smooth as the big one.

And yep, Morton is too big + the penguin is a little bit "weird" (not in style, in Mario 64 he looks dumber/more insensitive).

RE: GX's WIPs - mutantyoshi - 10-25-2009

Morton's face should be longer, and comes down more, Fix his arms, just give him fists like all the other koopalings/Bowser. fix the teeth, show more color/shading you cant tell the difference between the two last shades.


the Koopa Clown Car for Jr. should have that red make-up crap thinner and smaller, make the eyes thinner and smaller, they are too big, the green rim uptop is to big.

RE: GX's WIPs - SpencerEX - 10-25-2009

thanks for the c+c guys I will get to fixing those up later in the week. I think the item sheet is going pretty good, but I think I need some crits on this so I can fix up the stuff I already have.
[Image: itemsheet.png]

RE: GX's WIPs - Devicho - 10-25-2009

(10-25-2009, 04:37 AM)Darking Wrote: Bowser Jr. is made by Devicho, if I'm not wrong.
Sorry, but the only thing I think looks goods are the King Bob-omb and the Viruses. Morton, the Baby Clown Copter and the Penguin looks odd.
Actually that one was made by Ridge but I did make my own. (Front pose at least because I can't animate anything.)

RE: GX's WIPs - Boo - 10-25-2009

Is Morton Koopa not Brown or at least a little more brown? He's pretty much completely black in your sprite.

RE: GX's WIPs - mutantyoshi - 10-26-2009

(10-25-2009, 11:48 PM)Boo Wrote: Is Morton Koopa not Brown or at least a little more brown? He's pretty much completely black in your sprite.

Nope, thats how they are making him now.

RE: GX's WIPs - Boo - 10-26-2009

No actually they aren't, look at how much Brown there is here.

[Image: new-super-mario-bros-wii-20090602083526678.jpg]

RE: GX's WIPs - Darking - 10-26-2009

(10-25-2009, 11:48 PM)Boo Wrote: Is Morton Koopa not Brown or at least a little more brown? He's pretty much completely black in your sprite.

Yeah, Morton is more dark dark dark brown, not completely black.

RE: GX's WIPs - mutantyoshi - 10-26-2009

he seems to be a grayish-brown...That Image is different because of the lava. look here, http://www.mariowiki.com/images/d/d8/Nsmbwii1_3.jpg he has more of a grayish-brown, not sure on whats the name of that color.

RE: GX's WIPs - Jdaster64 - 10-27-2009

As far as the items go,

- The upper-left corner of the "P" in POW should probably not be AA'ed.
- The top of the 3up Moon's mouth looks a little strange.
- All of the sprites, unless not representing non-solid objects, should have the few same blackish and greyish shades for the outline.