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Dolphin and Magnus 2.0 M&L style with new and improved X-Nauts! - CeeY - 06-08-2008
I made a custom M&L Dolphin, and I made all the poses. I want you to approve it, so I know what Improvements I need to make. I made the Dolphin first, I will be making more creatures from SMW, and I also plan on submitting it. (sheet update #6)
![[Image: dolphinml2zy7.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fimg127.imageshack.us%2Fimg127%2F8065%2Fdolphinml2zy7.png&hash=2b6a272b24cf03bf9130ddc1ac6bf219)
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RE: Custom M&L Dolphin - toastersaurus - 06-08-2008
woah! those are pretty good! my only suggestion is that you make the tail on the vertically facing ones darker.
other than that, good job!
RE: Custom M&L Dolphin - Colton - 06-08-2008
Hm, the lineart is excellent, however, I don't think the shading fits the style. I wouldn't consider these enemies if it weren't for the fact that Yoshi was able to eat them in SMW XD But if you fix the shading, it should look nice. I think there's an M&L tutorial on the site. But as said, the lineart is nice, also, I like your color choice.
RE: Custom M&L Dolphin - CeeY - 06-08-2008
toastersaurus Wrote:woah! those are pretty good! my only suggestion is that you make the tail on the vertically facing ones darker.Ok, I made the tails on the vertical jumping motion darker.
other than that, good job!
RE: Custom M&L Dolphin - FinalYoshi - 06-08-2008
Like Colton said... You need to arrange the shading, but the others things on the sprite are correct. Just arrange the shading and that will be perfect.
RE: Custom M&L Dolphin - Chaoxys - 06-08-2008
don't their tail fins go the other way? It looks like a sharks tail fin.
RE: Custom M&L Dolphin - CeeY - 06-08-2008
FinalYoshi Wrote:Like Colton said... You need to arrange the shading, but the others things on the sprite are correct. Just arrange the shading and that will be perfect.Ok, I arranged the shading to fit the style.
RE: Custom M&L Dolphin - Kenjitake - 06-08-2008
pretty good... better than my blogg for metroid prime 2, I just cant get the swimming part right...
RE: Custom M&L Dolphin - Elebit - 06-08-2008
It doesn't look AA'd right, and needs more contrast. The shading is also a bit wierd...
RE: Custom M&L Dolphin - CeeY - 06-08-2008
Elebit Wrote:It doesn't look AA'd right, and needs more contrast. The shading is also a bit wierd...
![[Image: profpy4.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fimg259.imageshack.us%2Fimg259%2F7000%2Fprofpy4.png&hash=6cb2214102843a8e7a391468a734a205)
Maybe you see something I don't.
RE: Custom M&L Dolphin - Zero Kraid - 06-08-2008
Pretty good. It looks like it has a shark's tail though.
RE: Custom M&L Dolphin - CeeY - 06-08-2008
Plasma Trooper Wrote:Pretty good. It looks like it has a shark's tail though.I thought that the lineart would look better.
Anyway, which enemy/ally from SMW should I do next in M&L style that is not already on TSR?
RE: Custom M&L Dolphin - toastersaurus - 06-08-2008
I have noticed that you use three shades. everything but human skin in ML style has 2. still, good job.
RE: Custom M&L Dolphin - Zero Kraid - 06-08-2008
CoolYoshi Wrote:Anyway, which enemy/ally from SMW should I do next in M&L style that is not already on TSR?
How about... Cheep Cheeps? I haven't seen any on TSR yet.
RE: Custom M&L Dolphin - Elebit - 06-08-2008
CoolYoshi Wrote:Maybe you see something I don't.
![[Image: idioterrorfp6.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fimg363.imageshack.us%2Fimg363%2F381%2Fidioterrorfp6.png&hash=0439166cb20dbc40c4013da91deb55a0)