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Wart ML3 - Croshi - 02-21-2009

[Image: wart.png]
[Image: wart.png] NEW ONE!

I grabbed the arms and white part of the shell from Bowser and messed with them to get Wart's arms right.

C+C?

RE: Wart ML3 - Mabelma - 02-21-2009

Sorry bro but his arms look like they are round and not that the bottom part is the jacket.
Teeth are really bad but it's the color they are too dark.
Claws on his fingers are really bad the last ones look attached to each other.
Top part of the necklace needs some AA.
The lace of the necklace is too light.
I can't see the inside of the eyes.(too dark)
Eyebrows are to blending make them darker so they don't look like that.
The black part of the face is too big make it smaller(thick.

I hope I helped I think that the sprites have a lot of potential so I will be here to C+C them to the end.

RE: Wart ML3 - Croshi - 02-21-2009

[Image: wart.png]

Better?

RE: Wart ML3 - Mabelma - 02-21-2009

Here a check list of what you fixed.
Arms look like they are round and not that the bottom part is the jacket.
Teeth are really bad but it's they have no shading now.
Claws on his fingers are really bad the last ones look attached to each other.
Top part of the necklace needs some AA and the sides.
The lace of the necklace is too light. -Done
I can't see the inside of the eyes.(too dark)
Eyebrows are to blending make them darker so they don't look like that.
The black part of the face is too big make it smaller(thick). -Done

RE: Wart ML3 - Geir - 02-21-2009

It looks really great and you are really talented in spriting this style! Smile

The only thing I want to say, is his mouth kinda looks like:

[Image: wartmouth.png]
But maybe it's just me Cute

RE: Wart ML3 - Mabelma - 02-21-2009

So that's te problem to the mouth.
Fix that please and all of the other stuff I said too.

RE: Wart ML3 - Croshi - 02-21-2009

This better?

[Image: wart.png]

RE: Wart ML3 - Ragnarök - 02-21-2009

Much better

RE: Wart ML3 - Geir - 02-21-2009

Much better. Now I can see it's a mouth!

RE: Wart ML3 - Mabelma - 02-21-2009

Here's the new update check list:
Here a check list of what you fixed.
Claws on his fingers are really bad there's no last one.
Top part of the necklace needs some AA and the sides(sphere thing).
I can't see the inside of the eyes.(too dark)
Eyebrows are to blending make them darker so they don't look like that.

RE: Wart ML3 - Tero - 02-21-2009

Fix the Bowser shell off Wart, and generally try to make him look a bit heftier, Wart and Bowser don't have the same physic.

RE: Wart ML3 - Croshi - 02-21-2009

K, I didn't know you were talking about the sphere.

[Image: wart.png]

RE: Wart ML3 - Mabelma - 02-21-2009

Here's the new update check list:
Here a check list of what you fixed.
Claws on his fingers are really bad it look attached.
I can't see the inside of the eyes(too dark)(make a ball in a light color).
Eyebrows are to blending make them darker so they don't look like that.

RE: Wart ML3 - Croshi - 02-21-2009

When you say 'eyebrows'

what does that mean, do you mean the area above his eyes?

RE: Wart ML3 - Mabelma - 02-21-2009

Yeah that's what I mean.
I see your fixing one thing at a time.