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RE: [DRAWINGS] Doodles and Finished Pieces 2.0 - The KKM - 08-13-2015

drawn nasty sstuff

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RE: [DRAWINGS] Doodles and Finished Pieces 2.0 - Virt - 08-13-2015

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RE: [DRAWINGS] Doodles and Finished Pieces 2.0 - ~Axis~ - 08-13-2015

My ref character Spero and another created character that I haven't named yet. Crit?




RE: [DRAWINGS] Doodles and Finished Pieces 2.0 - ~Axis~ - 08-14-2015

Sorry for the double post guys but I just sat down to do a random doodle and this happened

I have no idea how I drew her......


RE: [DRAWINGS] Doodles and Finished Pieces 2.0 - Garamonde - 08-14-2015

That's pretty good. The eye closest to us is a bit too far toward our side though.


RE: [DRAWINGS] Doodles and Finished Pieces 2.0 - Filler - 08-14-2015

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My lacking skills of background drawing seek again.


RE: [DRAWINGS] Doodles and Finished Pieces 2.0 - ~Axis~ - 08-14-2015

Is this better? I moved the furthest eye a bit closer and completed the drawing.




RE: [DRAWINGS] Doodles and Finished Pieces 2.0 - Filler - 08-14-2015

@BlueBlur97

The right eye has an fish/horse eye issue where the eyes are placed on the sides of the face, rather than the front.

Fix that, and I'd say it's good.


RE: [DRAWINGS] Doodles and Finished Pieces 2.0 - Filler - 08-15-2015

I drew a thing.

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RE: [DRAWINGS] Doodles and Finished Pieces 2.0 - Garamonde - 08-15-2015

Close, but the eye closest to us should be closer to the center, it is too far on the side of her face right now. Here's a very rough edit:

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RE: [DRAWINGS] Doodles and Finished Pieces 2.0 - ~Axis~ - 08-15-2015

Thanks for the advice Mighty!

Opinions? Crit?


RE: [DRAWINGS] Doodles and Finished Pieces 2.0 - Virt - 08-15-2015

I'm not sure what her right leg (to our left) is supposed to be doing. The angle is awkward and very unclear.


RE: [DRAWINGS] Doodles and Finished Pieces 2.0 - ~Axis~ - 08-15-2015

(08-15-2015, 03:03 PM)Virt Wrote: I'm not sure what her right leg (to our left) is supposed to be doing. The angle is awkward and very unclear.

It is supposed to be bent.




RE: [DRAWINGS] Doodles and Finished Pieces 2.0 - Garamonde - 08-15-2015

It's probably because of the fact that her thigh there is really bulbous, and the outlines of it intersect into the leg in front of it and the hand. This leaves no negative space and makes it more difficult to read. I would make the outer thigh less rounded and maybe see if you couldn't make her hold it out a bit more so there is a bit of negative space between it and the other body parts.

(Sorry if that doesn't make sense)


RE: [DRAWINGS] Doodles and Finished Pieces 2.0 - The KKM - 08-15-2015

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Also

(08-15-2015, 09:20 AM)Mighty Jetters Wrote: Close, but the eye closest to us should be closer to the center, it is too far on the side of her face right now. Here's a very rough edit:

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Eeeeh, I feel you put it too close. The face is not a flat frontal print, in certain angles the eyes will be further away from the nose.

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