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You confronted a Starman! - DioShiba - 05-24-2008

EDIT: to prevent confusion, this is not SMB sprite, It's Earthbound related.

[Image: starmansheetzb2.png]
Meh, I am not completely satisfied with it, right now I am trying to make a sheet with it.

Anyways, criticism please!

RE: You confronted a Starman! - theguy - 05-24-2008

Here goes; It has banded shading, it hasn't got enough contrast, you didn't shade based on the shape... and that's it also the colours are... ok

RE: You confronted a Starman! - DioShiba - 05-24-2008

tomster785 Wrote:Here goes; It has banded shading, it hasn't got enough contrast, you didn't shade based on the shape... and that's it also the colours are... ok
Like this?
[Image: starmansheetir3.png]
Also added pallete

RE: You confronted a Starman! - Pik - 05-24-2008

Less Pillowing, more Contrast, a better shape, and some hue shifting.


Stuff that's needed.

RE: You confronted a Starman! - DioShiba - 05-24-2008

pikspiksmaroator Wrote:Less Pillowing, more Contrast, a better shape, and some hue shifting.


Stuff that's needed.

Got it, right now I am gonna take a break from spriting though, Now on my to do list.

RE: You confronted a Starman! - DioShiba - 05-25-2008

[Image: starmansheetvh9.png]
Made new shape (In front view) just wan to be sure it is alright before I go in to detail, also ignore second pallete. (also I added crits on sheet for reminder)

RE: You confronted a Starman! - Wavey - 05-25-2008

Bigger torso, plz, arms look too straight and edgy, make them smoother and curvy.

RE: You confronted a Starman! - Chdonga - 05-25-2008

I don't see any thing bad about it... wait, don't Starmen have pointy heads, or is that just one kind of Starman?

RE: You confronted a Starman! - Wavey - 05-25-2008

No they don't have pointy heads. :/

RE: You confronted a Starman! - Chdonga - 05-25-2008

None of 'em? Hmph must be a different Starman I'm thinking of then...

BTW-Starman kicks ass!

RE: You confronted a Starman! - Pik - 05-25-2008

Better. His body should be wider, and I like the second palette BTW.

Though it still needs more contrast.

RE: You confronted a Starman! - DioShiba - 05-31-2008

[Image: starmansheeteh2.png]
Meh, still could use more contrast.... Also new pallette. (And yet I can barely tell if I shaded it good since it's a bit small)