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Some time before death - Phantom Killah - 02-10-2013
![[Image: nXNxJhe.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi.imgur.com%2FnXNxJhe.png&hash=05d8003e44bcd8fc4be11f14d45cdbb1)
self portrait.
Still need to finish doing the hair and clean up the hat. Looking at it now, I think the ear might be too big as well. Any c+c would be appreciated
RE: Some time before death - Phantom Killah - 02-10-2013
![[Image: OqfAX00.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi.imgur.com%2FOqfAX00.png&hash=29d8f0b11e3822e5c7ec922dd886b1fa)
the other me. Well, one of the other me's.
RE: Some time before death - Previous - 02-10-2013
The first one's right cheek (his right) looks kinda bland compared to the rest, it somehow seems to lack some defining shading. I feel like the second one's hat's left end (our left) should line up with the left end of the face more (the not-brim part). The ears look somewhat random and probably have too much detail going on compared to the whole.
Other than that, these look quite fantastics. I like your style.
RE: Some time before death - Phantom Killah - 02-10-2013
All right, the gang's all here
![[Image: 8WFfide.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi.imgur.com%2F8WFfide.png&hash=9b0a8c23c721a3da1e77b42a4ec909bc)
I tried adding some more definition to the cheek, not sure how well it worked out. I'll work on the ears soon. My eyes (the first one) are kind of bugging me now.
Also, wow, I might actually look good in a fedora.
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fixed a bunch of stuff, looks better now
RE: Some time before death - Novally - 02-10-2013
Are these the original sizes. Idk looks kind of scaled to me. Some parts of the shading should be smoothen out. Also Sherlock Holmes and Watson?
RE: Some time before death - Sengir - 02-10-2013
The first one you made is missing an upper lip
RE: Some time before death - Phantom Killah - 02-10-2013
They're not scaled, but I could definitely refine the shading.
(02-10-2013, 05:12 PM)Novally Wrote: Also Sherlock Holmes and Watson?
haha, nope, but that does make sense.
They're just some ghosts that haven't died yet
http://i.imgur.com/BlyKo.png
Sengir: might be part of why it looks off...I'll try adding more lip
RE: Some time before death - Phantom Killah - 02-10-2013
Did a bunch of clean up and detail work
![[Image: Dd93JAG.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi.imgur.com%2FDd93JAG.png&hash=d9f2f1e459354cfc667896cb6a78600f)
I think the first one looks a lot better now (and a lot more like me)
RE: Some time before death - Kirbyfan - 02-10-2013
No more smile?
I think you had his right cheek/cheekbone better the first time you fixed it. That shading (2 pixels) looks a bit weird now. It makes the shape look weird next too his left.
If you could emulate the old cheek (fixed) with your newly-shaped face, I think it'd work out well.