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TTL N3RD 4 U - EF-WHY-EL - 12-16-2010
I got LSDJ the other day and made a little tune. This tune isn't great but i'm only just starting out on this software/hardware.
I was getting a bit sick of milkytracker, mainly because I wasn't getting the right sounds I wanted and the making a groove or shuffle on lsdj is easier etc
Criticism would be good or tips would be great.
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RE: TTL N3RD 4 U - Lexou Duck - 12-16-2010
(12-16-2010, 05:27 AM)EF-WHY-EL Wrote: Criticism would be good
(12-16-2010, 05:27 AM)EF-WHY-EL Wrote: tips would be great.
what
RE: TTL N3RD 4 U - Proton - 12-16-2010
(12-16-2010, 05:59 AM)Lexou Wrote:Tips, as in, little hints as to how to continue with music or how to make it better,(12-16-2010, 05:27 AM)EF-WHY-EL Wrote: Criticism would be good(12-16-2010, 05:27 AM)EF-WHY-EL Wrote: tips would be great.
what
and crit,
as in, what's wrong, what needs to be fixed and what needs more goodnesses.
RE: TTL N3RD 4 U - DioShiba - 12-16-2010
I'll pretend lexou was being sarcastic.
Anyways, I would like this more if it wasn't a mixture of raster graphics and vectors, to be honest.
RE: TTL N3RD 4 U - Lexou Duck - 12-17-2010
Actually, I just wanted to point out that criticism is just as good as tips; No more, no less.
RE: TTL N3RD 4 U - Chutzpar - 12-17-2010
Side-eying at this thread.
It's pretty pointless picking at how they phrased their post when they want concrit on their music. :I
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The song is cute! I think maybe it's a bit too bassy though; the two basslines are sort of overpowering the melody for me a bit. Can you make them quieter, or maybe make one of them a bit higher so it's less heavy?
RE: TTL N3RD 4 U - EF-WHY-EL - 01-23-2011
(12-17-2010, 12:48 PM)Tachikoma Wrote: Side-eying at this thread.
It's pretty pointless picking at how they phrased their post when they want concrit on their music. :I
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The song is cute! I think maybe it's a bit too bassy though; the two basslines are sort of overpowering the melody for me a bit. Can you make them quieter, or maybe make one of them a bit higher so it's less heavy?
I dunno if this will count as a necropost or whatever but I haven't been on in a long time.
I would done exactly that if I hadn't gone and accidentally saved over that song file
Listening back to it the bass does pull you away from the melody a fair bit.Anyways, I have been practicing a bit more recently and have another song to put up.
Same again, crit is always welcome.
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Just to add. I love how many people asked about the "crit or tip" thing...
That was pretty much me not thinking.
RE: TTL N3RD 4 U - Gwen - 01-23-2011
Not going to lie, I almost hoped I was going to hear outrageously awesome black metal chiptune when I clicked on that.
I still liked the song a lot though
RE: TTL N3RD 4 U - EF-WHY-EL - 01-23-2011
Haha, I think i'm going to have to give this black metal chiptune a go. It would be hilariously entertaining!
Glad you liked what you heard. It's most definitely the polar opposite of black metal haha
RE: TTL N3RD 4 U - LaDestitute - 01-26-2011
I like it very much.Very retroy, very Earthbound=ish.
RE: TTL N3RD 4 U - EF-WHY-EL - 02-02-2011
Thanks
I'm happy you enjoyed it.It's funny you said earthbound-ish because I really wanna cover Twinkle Elementary from earthbound or mother haha, i dunno if they're the same thing or not.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I9MS-Sq7Sow
I first heard this tune in the credits of gameboy camera.