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are names really necessary? - BobbyLala - 10-14-2010
![[Image: gazed.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fimg834.imageshack.us%2Fimg834%2F1583%2Fgazed.png&hash=affc3c7408247b469b5dda6393b0f512)
started this on tuesday out of boredom
i'm quite happy with myself considering i didn't use any references but i'm sure that there are some flaws which you can help me identify
and yes. the hat is big.
critique please
RE: are names really necessary? - Chris2Balls [:B] - 10-14-2010
the hat seems fine to me! you've made an effort in making the hair in strands, and i have to say i like it! the real letdown is the face and the colours. i'm going to edit it, brb
keep it up!
![[Image: beeted.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fimg229.imageshack.us%2Fimg229%2F7112%2Fbeeted.png&hash=11f1d1d1f58ddafe9d48aab44cd4db3e)
i have an issue with the contrast, the contrast between different elements, and the colours. some of the strands on the left seem off.
RE: are names really necessary? - GrooveMan.exe - 10-14-2010
That edit has the nose the right position, but it looks kinda manly now...
RE: are names really necessary? - Britt - 10-14-2010
The chin looks to be a bit far forward, and a bit man-shaped.
Otherwise, I love it, the hair especially came out nice.
RE: are names really necessary? - Delicious - 10-14-2010
The dithering isn't necessary on this piece, unless you wanted to keep the color count down? I just don't think it works since it gives the hat a rough texture. Overall, it's quite nice. I especially enjoy the hair! Well done. =)
RE: are names really necessary? - Woppet* - 10-14-2010
I agree with everything Chris said, the face and colours need a lot of work, it's a pretty nice attempt though.
Also wtf, we have like practically the same avatar.
RE: are names really necessary? - Alpha Six - 10-15-2010
(10-14-2010, 05:22 PM)GrooveMan.exe Wrote: That edit has the nose the right position, but it looks kinda manly now...chris2men
RE: are names really necessary? - BobbyLala - 10-15-2010
Thanks for the comments
@chris2balls: many thanks for the edit, I can now see how off the original nose was. Although, yeah, she does look a bit manlier now which is probably thick eyebrows amongst other things
@Delicious: I originally put in the dithering to emulate the wooliness of the hat but if it doesn't really work I can remove it
@Woppet: I think we changed avatars at exactly the same time because I saw your avatar about 5mins after I changed mine and I though exactly the same thing
I'm gonna be in Beijing for the next two weeks so I won't be able to work on it but when i get back it I'll start working on it
RE: are names really necessary? - Delicious - 10-15-2010
Nevermind then, I think the dithering might work here.. Perhaps another color could help form the texture a bit more?
Anyways, have fun on your trip!