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RE: Reworkshop Thread - Hoeloe - 05-03-2012
That is an improvement, you know. I recommend smoothing your lines out, too. Kirby is looking a little square.
RE: Reworkshop Thread - Sevenstitch - 05-03-2012
What does this read as to you guys?
![[Image: pawn.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fdl.dropbox.com%2Fu%2F63227487%2Ftsr%2520sprites%2Fpawn.png&hash=9fc9e5d302cf9381a54c918375085970)
Its supposed to be a Chess Pawn kind of guy.
RE: Reworkshop Thread - Jamuk - 05-03-2012
If it's a pawn, I'd shorten the legs and make them straighter. That way it'll emphasise the body shape more, and make it look less like a sprite for the ladies' toilets.
RE: Reworkshop Thread - Sevenstitch - 05-03-2012
Hmm, how about this then?
First =>
![[Image: pawn2.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fdl.dropbox.com%2Fu%2F63227487%2Ftsr%2520sprites%2Fpawn2.png&hash=7dd988bc371f7c6f0357dd52dfc8582b)
<= NowI'm afraid to shorten the torso, because the arms are stubs to begin with.
RE: Reworkshop Thread - recme - 05-03-2012
It's overdetailed and lightsource is upleft. I suggest you make your own thread rather than here at the Reworkshop thread.
RE: Reworkshop Thread - Gaia - 05-03-2012
![[Image: kalh79.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi50.tinypic.com%2Fkalh79.png&hash=26168931a676a01cd68f6d8b605ebee4)
Reworked this old thing to match the guy's newer design.
RE: Reworkshop Thread - Shade - 05-07-2012
![[Image: imYsk2UDR3ph5.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi.minus.com%2FimYsk2UDR3ph5.png&hash=a5b501a76abcde2f4450c128cd30cf4d)
Posting this here too. It's from a Beat 'em Up/Platformer game I've been working on. The background hasn't been a priority just yet, but I will get to that soon.
RE: Reworkshop Thread - Kachua - 05-09-2012
![[Image: O0U5i.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi.imgur.com%2FO0U5i.png&hash=7d4ba2a0fee8daeeb58bdd5424f66595)
Inazuma style
I did not create this character ( I made this for my friend~ )
RE: Reworkshop Thread - Virt - 07-08-2012
![[Image: 3pMp3.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi.imgur.com%2F3pMp3.png&hash=704f27a2ed697719716a7665c57fe712)
Bawmp.
I wanted to play around with shading but I don't think it turned out all that well??
The lineart is fine IMO but I'm a bit concerned about how the shading is placed.
Mario's shading has always confused me.
Lineart thread - SKELTON S. SKELETON - 08-09-2012
Back on TSR of old, we used to have a really handy thread that was just unfinished/finished/retired linearts. It was a good place to get short critiques or just generally work on your line comprehension/spacing.
So I'm..bringing that back...
i don't have anything new to post, so here, have this, it's really bad
also requesting a sticky!
![[Image: ZGkFW.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi.imgur.com%2FZGkFW.png&hash=79dd1a166aedc8bca1e85062bbc38d7b)
RE: Reworkshop Thread - Previous - 08-09-2012
The Reworkshop Thread is basically the same thing so I'll merge them~
RE: Reworkshop Thread - SKELTON S. SKELETON - 08-09-2012
oh, was this already stickied, too..
RE: Reworkshop Thread - Chris2Balls [:B] - 08-21-2012
![[Image: BnDxM.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi.imgur.com%2FBnDxM.png&hash=0e1e95bc7b00a9bd137c3606faa46139)
almost done, was wondering if there was anything i could change
RE: Reworkshop Thread - Gors - 08-21-2012
that is quite experimental so there's not much to discuss imo. Maybe in terms of design, you could make the bg like a spotlight (light circle in a dark bg) to further emphazise the character, but that's it. Nice texturing by the way!
RE: Reworkshop Thread - Baegal - 08-21-2012
The mouth reminds me of Yoshi's Island