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excuse me while i runa way from home - Cobalt Blue - 05-18-2010
what do you guys think? are those colors pleasant for you? i'm not entirely sure and i'm really in need for second opinions.
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RE: excuse me while i runa way from home - Sengir - 05-19-2010
The only problem I see is that it's hard to discern between her left hand and the backpack strap
RE: excuse me while i runa way from home - GrooveMan.exe - 05-19-2010
The blue in her face shading makes her look ill.
RE: excuse me while i runa way from home - Kitsu - 05-19-2010
I think the red could maybe use a bit more contrast or something.
Also, what the two above said.
RE: excuse me while i runa way from home - X Gamer 66 - 05-19-2010
Cute! the reds are really dull and the blues on the shirt are very vibrant. Not sure which effect you're going for, but I'd change one so it fits with the other.
the arm holes look huge, or the arms are really thin, I can't tell. also,
Quote:it's hard to discern between the hands and the backpack straps
RE: excuse me while i runa way from home - Dave - 05-19-2010
I dont like the arms at all they look weird, the colors are nice, but the blue in the face doesnt match.
RE: excuse me while i runa way from home - Gors - 05-19-2010
her eyes make her look kinda derpy
the shading on the clothes is p. strange, there are a lot of pointy corners too
RE: excuse me while i runa way from home - Rhyme - 05-19-2010
What's going on with her left (our right) eye? looks retarded. her arms look WAY slim compared to the size of shirt she has.
RE: excuse me while i runa way from home - JarJar - 05-20-2010
i think some change in clothes colors might help, at first i thought she was trying out for athletics or something instead of running away since shes in all white.
RE: excuse me while i runa way from home - Jovian-12 - 05-20-2010
the shading in the hair could use more contrast, both in shade and hue, considering you shaded her face with blue. you could probably stand to lower the top of her head, too...it looks a bit long and lumpy.
RE: excuse me while i runa way from home - Cobalt Blue - 05-20-2010
ackonowledge everything posted so far, will post an update in a few hours when i'm back from work.