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He has a bomb floating over his head - [robo9] - 12-15-2009
And should stop stealing tid bits and ideas from 1 Up
![[Image: 95tr1y.jpg]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fs6.tinypic.com%2F95tr1y.jpg&hash=87edde18f646d04e261fb2c79c27b5f4)
I tried messing around to add a peering over? I guess animation for Goomba :/
![[Image: mu90eq.jpg]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi46.tinypic.com%2Fmu90eq.jpg&hash=c04bf17449013829bf9e7362af241db3)
tried to sprite my ref :/
C+C appreciated
RE: I really should stop making so many different SD topics - Baegal - 12-15-2009
Goomba look very flat when bending over, and your ref's head could have sharper edges, also, dont make his leg a straight line
RE: I really should stop making so many different SD topics - [robo9] - 12-16-2009
![[Image: vsh15x.jpg]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi49.tinypic.com%2Fvsh15x.jpg&hash=01a89eb4529e241a5fecf44a0b960bdc)
Something I don't really like about it, but :/
C+C?
RE: I really should stop making so many different SD topics - Baegal - 12-16-2009
(12-15-2009, 07:46 PM)Charlie the Misfit Toy Wrote: your ref's head could have sharper edges, also, dont make his leg a straight line
RE: I really should stop making so many different SD topics - [robo9] - 12-17-2009
1,2, or 3? And A or B?
Personally I like the 3rd one :/
1 is a stance I saw in a karate class on Main Street, 2 is using Iori as a reference, and 3 is just the back leg of the 2nd one edited to both legs
RE: He has a bomb floating over his head - Baegal - 12-17-2009
1, it adds more movement, and b for the head. You should also make it less tall.
RE: He has a bomb floating over his head - [robo9] - 12-18-2009
Shortened him a few pixels. Also made the regular, idle head. (The other is a angry, or battle pose head) and the first frame of a short, salute taunt.
I think I'll use number 3's legs for idle and attention poses.
RE: He has a bomb floating over his head - Cobalt Blue - 12-18-2009
less black outlines in smaller sprites in favor of using shading to define shapes would do an awesome boost to these small sprites.
RE: He has a bomb floating over his head - [robo9] - 12-19-2009
![[Image: 28wfk0o.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi49.tinypic.com%2F28wfk0o.png&hash=c02ad5b200ccff45562e7fd4817b838b)
(The right one hasnt been worked on at all)
Tried following Metaru's advice.
As much as I could, could you explain it a bit? Its going over my head.
Also tried fixing some of the shading.
Im not real satisfied how it turned out, Ill work on it more when I can get on a computer and not an Ipod
RE: He has a bomb floating over his head - Cobalt Blue - 12-19-2009
look at my avatar, it has literally no outlines but instead uses shading in some key parts to give it depth.
RE: He has a bomb floating over his head - [robo9] - 12-19-2009
![[Image: 30mptt3.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi47.tinypic.com%2F30mptt3.png&hash=735692be875291b848f1967a21114eea)
Okay Meteru.
Top is no outlines, and bottom is no outlines, and trying to shade in key spots to define the shape.
RE: He has a bomb floating over his head - Jovian-12 - 12-20-2009
ooh, I really like those now. the bottom moreso.
personally, however, I've found a more orangey color to be good for shading yellow instead of just plain old dark yellow. dark yellow looks pretty icky.
RE: He has a bomb floating over his head - [robo9] - 12-20-2009
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Any better?
Also another TSR rep and a MFGG one~