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RE: King Dedede - Neslug - 01-18-2010 Looks pillowshaded, the blue and brown (hammer) need to be more vivid. RE: King Dedede - Teddy The Elite - 01-18-2010 (01-18-2010, 02:33 AM)Bazzoka Wrote: Me thinks the main problem of the sprite is the fact that the outlines inside the sprite are sttill as black. I'm not seeing that much in the other sprites. :V ^This hard. RE: King Dedede - red reaper - 01-18-2010 i see what everyone means ill take another crack at it in a bit edits; is this any better if not some else give it a try RE: King Dedede - ectoBiologist - 01-18-2010 Heh, it seems like everytime I try an edit someone else gets there faster and does it better than I do. The shading is great, but the linework still seems like a sketch. It needs to be a little bit smoother. Out of all the chars in brawl, DeDeDe is one of the cartooniest. He looks rougher than both DK and Bowser. I can't put my finger on all the problems, but I know one of them is the hammer. Something just bugs me about it. RE: King Dedede - red reaper - 01-18-2010 (01-18-2010, 09:23 PM)Airicy Wrote: Heh, it seems like everytime I try an edit someone else gets there faster and does it better than I do. The shading is great, but the linework still seems like a sketch. It needs to be a little bit smoother. Out of all the chars in brawl, DeDeDe is one of the cartooniest. He looks rougher than both DK and Bowser. I can't put my finger on all the problems, but I know one of them is the hammer. Something just bugs me about it.its too small RE: King Dedede - Phantom Killah - 01-18-2010 It looks way too dirty RE: King Dedede - red reaper - 01-18-2010 (01-18-2010, 09:58 PM)Phantom K Wrote: It looks way too dirtyi see what you mean he is harder than he looks RE: King Dedede - ectoBiologist - 01-19-2010 Amen. I figured it'd be one of the easiest ones. D; RE: King Dedede - red reaper - 01-20-2010 i gave it another try hows it look now RE: King Dedede - Phantom Killah - 01-20-2010 Not entirely happy with what I have so far, but I think this is closer to what we're going for RE: King Dedede - red reaper - 01-20-2010 (01-20-2010, 10:44 PM)Phantom K Wrote: Not entirely happy with what I have so far, but I think this is closer to what we're going forlooks good but the mouth looks kinda ridged RE: King Dedede - Phantom Killah - 01-20-2010 yeah, the mouth and hat are pretty bad, and it needs general work everywhere RE: King Dedede - red reaper - 01-20-2010 i don't know why but he seems impossible to get right RE: King Dedede - Phantom Killah - 01-20-2010 fixed up the mouth RE: King Dedede - red reaper - 01-20-2010 (01-20-2010, 11:00 PM)Phantom K Wrote:nice but there's one pixel that needs darken up on his mouth cause it looks like a tooth |