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Here goes; It has banded shading, it hasn't got enough contrast, you didn't shade based on the shape... and that's it also the colours are... ok
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Less Pillowing, more Contrast, a better shape, and some hue shifting.
Stuff that's needed.
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Bigger torso, plz, arms look too straight and edgy, make them smoother and curvy.
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I don't see any thing bad about it... wait, don't Starmen have pointy heads, or is that just one kind of Starman?
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No they don't have pointy heads. :/
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None of 'em? Hmph must be a different Starman I'm thinking of then...
BTW-Starman kicks ass!
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05-25-2008, 07:27 PM
(This post was last modified: 05-25-2008, 07:28 PM by Pik.)
Better. His body should be wider, and I like the second palette BTW.
Though it still needs more contrast.