Help me guys......

[Hoeloe]

It's not worse, but it's not really better either. You're using for too many straight lines, for one thing - try making things smoother by using curves. Another problem is that you're not really considering the whole piece when you draw this - you're just considering each part separately. This means you have a lot of disjointed pieces of your sprite. Your lines, for example, don't really appear to make a shape - they are just lines. The thing about spriting in particular is that you need to use these pixels to give the illusion of an object (much like animation is lots of images played very fast to give the illusion of movement). At the moment, your sprite is more "a bunch of lines" than an object, and this is because you haven't paid attention to the piece as a whole enough.