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[Image: zaneidle.gif]
[Image: zanewalk.gif]
[Image: zanejump.gif]
[Image: zaneidle2.gif]
[Image: zanerunt.gif]
[Image: zanerunleft.gif]
[Image: zanerunpushe.gif]
[Image: promoartthing.gif]-WIP
Nice fluid animations. Well done.

The skateboard pose where you see his back should have more hood movement, though, I'd say.
In the jump animation, he stays in the air for too long.
maybe because that doesnt really show how much he will move in the air.
Oh hey, I should work on my character.

I don't like the jump either, but everything else is awesome.
The only thing I'm unsure of is how you use black (or a color dark enough to look black) as your outline for everything, but the outline of his face is much lighter. It looks a bit inconsistent to me, especially since you don't do the same for his hands.
The animations are great, though; nice job on those.
I like the last dude, although I don't know what those purple things are on his scarf. Reminds me of Solar Boy Django.
Previous- okay
Torres/Drei- what metaru said
estian- the only thing with a black outline is the hair
Great animation!
(06-14-2009, 06:57 PM)Metaboss Wrote: [ -> ]+1 Postcount

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Anyhow, I agree there should be some more movement on the skateboard, and the jump seems a hair too long. The jump feels like it'd be ridiculously high otherwise. Your larger pixel art is somewhat hard to follow at the moment, but it does look ok, and once you add some more depth ad colors, it'll probably be more visually understandable. At least to me.