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Is there anything else wrong with my sprites?
EDIT:Whoops Double post
My opinion is that the legs are too thin but I'm still learning about this so don't take me to serious.
Whose? Mario's Or Luigi's?
Mario's legs are too thin and Luigi's belly needs to be a little rounder right on the middle, but not too fat cause he won't look like Luigi.
Ok. Currently fixing roundness. Done with the roundness.[attachment=1708]
Awesome Luigi looks better all you need know is make the legs of Mario bigger.
Ok. Ill fix that now. His legs are a bit wider now.
The standing sprites look awesome but the walking sprites still need work on the legs.
Try making the pants mark a bit more long and upward.
And try to shade the leg that is his back leg more when walking.
otherwards, the idle sprites look good.
his head is better, but it's still blocky. Also, try adding some hair on the back of his head. Make Mario's stache bigger, too. And you may redo the walking animation. It's way easier than editing.

Good job on the body, though Smile
1 thing is REALLY bugging me with the body. This gets me all the time and I get really picky about this stuff:
On the overalls, the yellow dots are positioned as if Mario were facing forward, but he's facing sideways. The dots should move a little to the right and be a little closer. The dot on our right (Mario's left) should either be hanging off the shirt or it could be wrapping around the edge of the body.
OK. Buttons = Better Position, Stache= Bigger, Back of head= More hair, Leg Shading= Better[attachment=1715][attachment=1715]
Awesome I think you nailed it with this new ones but you sill need to fix the thinness of the legs when he's walking.
Thanks, I will. Legs = Wider
phew! Those buttons are much better now.

Give Mario more hair. On the side of his head, his hear looks a little thin. In fact, on any Mario picture, you see that he has 2 locks of hair. On your sprite, the amount of hair you gave him is about thew size of 1 of Mario's locks.
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