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Okay, let's try this again;

unrestricted pallet. (that a bad thing?)
The hair looks good to me if I can only to make it look less... glossy.
other problems you might see as well.
Heavy and honest crits welcome please

that link's all over the place, his eyes seem to be turned whereas we have a head-on face, and his neck is not centred wit his body properly:

Where is your single lightsource? You need better colors on the shield and more contrast on the whole piece.

Looks good.

I'm sorry, but I can't help but see those cute cheeks as pimples with a white heads... Perhaps don't use the white overtop of the pink, it contrasts it apart far to much.