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(06-22-2010, 05:52 PM)Mabelma Wrote: [ -> ]Just use the edit as a reference and improve your mistakes.

I'll try to remake 10 and 13.

Do as you wish, just learn your mistakes.

(06-22-2010, 04:17 PM)breebreecrabcore Wrote: [ -> ]it's nice, i like the pallet

looks A BIT like an adaptation of wonderbros

pfft
nice originality bro


but seriously good job

shut up newhunter

(06-22-2010, 06:23 PM)Burn Wrote: [ -> ]

(06-22-2010, 04:17 PM)breebreecrabcore Wrote: [ -> ]it's nice, i like the pallet

looks A BIT like an adaptation of wonderbros

pfft
nice originality bro


but seriously good job

shut up newhunter

What is a newhunter?

(06-22-2010, 06:42 PM)2-D Wrote: [ -> ]

(06-22-2010, 06:23 PM)Burn Wrote: [ -> ]

(06-22-2010, 04:17 PM)breebreecrabcore Wrote: [ -> ]it's nice, i like the pallet

looks A BIT like an adaptation of wonderbros

pfft
nice originality bro


but seriously good job

shut up newhunter

What is a newhunter?

haha, nothing
nevermind

for the record, i preferred him with a black shirt

No clue, here's my edit.

I hope you can use it in some way.I took the hair from breebree's edit and tweaked the darkest shade and some of the highlights. Messed around with the shading on the shirt and on the face and the pants, there's some highlights on the center and the side of the legs because from my understanding, light bounces off the floor lighting some of those areas. It has 13-15 colors which could possibly be toned down seeing as it's a fairly small sprite, it doesn't really need so many colors.There are some misplaced pixels on the bottom of the face but that was just me messing around, looks like I forgot to take them out.

(06-22-2010, 07:07 PM)Mabelma Wrote: [ -> ]No clue, here's my edit.

I hope you can use it in some way.I took the hair from breebree's edit and tweaked the darkest shade and some of the highlights. Messed around with the shading on the shirt and on the face and the pants, there's some highlights on the center and the side of the legs because from my understanding, light bounces off the floor lighting some of those areas. It has 13-15 colors which could possibly be toned down seeing as it's a fairly small sprite, it doesn't really need so many colors.There are some misplaced pixels on the bottom of the face but that was just me messing around, looks like I forgot to take them out.

Looks great, right now I was using Bree Bree's edit and found some new things that I could improve, and now with your's I could make it a bit better.

(06-22-2010, 07:19 PM)2-D Wrote: [ -> ]

(06-22-2010, 07:07 PM)Mabelma Wrote: [ -> ]No clue, here's my edit.

I hope you can use it in some way.I took the hair from breebree's edit and tweaked the darkest shade and some of the highlights. Messed around with the shading on the shirt and on the face and the pants, there's some highlights on the center and the side of the legs because from my understanding, light bounces off the floor lighting some of those areas. It has 13-15 colors which could possibly be toned down seeing as it's a fairly small sprite, it doesn't really need so many colors.There are some misplaced pixels on the bottom of the face but that was just me messing around, looks like I forgot to take them out.

Looks great, right now I was using Bree Bree's edit and found some new things that I could improve, and now with your's I could make it a bit better.

Can't wait to see the newer version but keep in mind not to rely to much on mine seeing as it was done fairly quick and it still has some problems regarding shading.

Appriciate the great tips Gorsal. This really helps me out a lot. I really needed this. Thanks.

16 Just got some new stuff, I used both edits to make it a bit better, The hair cahnged just a little bit, the shirt was a bit of a problem, but I got it, I think.
13 and 10 were a huge problem in the hair, so Im not going to do it, until I get some help, or get some idea on how to start it at all. But the shirts on both 10 and 13 have also been remaded, and I really am liking this new style.

I kinda got bored and saw this user's Avatar. Sorry for using it, it just seemed so interesting and I kinda wanted to edit the one I already made.

Sorry for double post.
So far, I have learned a lot from doing this and I think I kinda got the shading down. The hair was a problem due to the lightsource, but I think I got it.
Any new comments?

Looking really nice but I fear the have to many colors, you could reduce everything by 1 or two colors by using the same colors where they fit.
red has 14 colors including black and black has 11 including black.

(06-24-2010, 04:06 PM)Mabelma Wrote: [ -> ]Looking really nice but I fear the have to many colors, you could reduce everything by 1 or two colors by using the same colors where they fit.
red has 14 colors including black and black has 11 including black.

I see, thanks for the tip, I'll keep it in mind, Im back to the editing board.

No probs, it's not much of an issue but it just has way to many colors.