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I thought I'd try spriting again, and I promous to listen

(Not Shaded yet, I want C+c on the sprite first)

Weird
And around his mouth it got a pink circle too

well its a good start good luck

needs more life. these rabbits are certainly more than a standing doll.

Perhaps an uneven stance would mark the difference here.

Oh boy...listen. You need to finish one project before you start another.

First off i don't know if i can do this if i can't tell me and i'll delete this

OK now your sprite is off to a good start but before you start the complex shading you should first make the outline pixel art then start adding color

Second i like your concept the ears though are a bit weird and he might be a smig tall

Last make the stance fit more to the video game
Starring at the camera thats good but also try a side stance example

Mines not that good im just showing you
This is a good project and i hope you finish it
Good Luck

it doesnt really need to be sideview, but thats certainly better than the original.

but then again i just noticed who's OP, and i'm p sure this is going nowhere.

needs a smaller body, methinks. I don't recall them having bodies longer than their heads.

I suggest you to study official Rayman Raving Rabbies's artwork to see by yourself what are you doing wrong.

Plunger for further poses

As you can see, the head should be bigger than the body (you did it backwards) and the general shape is oval, with soft edges.

I suggest you to sprite a bare body first and then add the ears and other details.

(12-27-2009, 01:22 PM)Maneko Wrote: [ -> ]As you can see, the head should be bigger than the body (you did it backwards) and the general shape is oval, with soft edges.

I suggest you to sprite a bare body first and then add the ears and other details.

I agree