JUS character, should i continue?

[LeleleleMAXIMUM]

My question is valid if you read it, dumbass. <-- swearing makes me cool, see, lolol
Suigetsu can turn into water (connected to his muscle-building ability), which probably explains/justifies the white hair.
Sasori is arrogant and his character dictates that when he shows his final form (you seem to have forgotten that he usually appears as his puppet form, which, SURPRISE, has dark hair), he wouldn't want to hide. Actually, when he shows his final form, it already means he's been fighting for some time, so hiding is pretty useless.
And Konan doesn't even need to hide, if you've noticed. She scouts with her paper.

If you don't want to give a reason for him streaking his hair white (or any color, lololol), then alright then.
And I didn't even see your comment about the clothes, so.

Made an edit:

Yours>>Mine
1. Added nose. Other JUS sprites have noses. Based on your avatar, he has a nose.
2. Edited shading. Put his left arm in shadow, made his pants more readable (less random shading), shading on turtleneck, shading on strap.
3. I thought he was holding a kunai, but it turns out that was bandage of some sort. I tried to fix it, but eh. Half-assed attempt on my part, really.
4. Removed flab. Still looks bad though, hmm.
5. Removed three colors, I think.

[Gwen]

edit:nevermind, way to call my work shit and be an ass about it through secretive ways and bluntly, get the fuck out of my topic, turning into water doesnt justify silver hair btw.
made the fixes my self.

[LeleleleMAXIMUM]

Oh my god. Shut up, we are trying to help you. We all think our work is shit<-- if we didn't, WE WOULDN'T ASK FOR CRITIQUE.
I wasn't even insinuating anything, can you please point me to the part/s in my post where I UNKNOWINGLY secretly called your art shit?

[Gwen]

you saved the file as shitshittyshit...and just leave, im not arguing again, and for your info, im pretty sure most of us dont hate our work,we want to improve it to its best.

[halfangelfreak]

Angel, buddy, I think Mr. Buttbutt is right in this -- after all, I did the same exact thing to critique on your sprites before, but onto critique... he basically covered everything.

[LeleleleMAXIMUM]

If you look at all the images of other people's work I edited (mostly from a few years ago, since I only edit when I feel like it), it's named something like "shit" or "editshit". Or even "whatthefuckingdick.png". It's mostly because I don't want to waste time thinking names. Even some of my own work is named something like that. I was making a Cave Story remake and the filename was "shit2". My god, are you that mentally challenged?
And if you're saying you don't think your work is bad but you want to improve <-- that's a contradiction. If you want to improve, it means you think your work is bad/missing something. Most accomplished artists think their work is bad.

"He who knows not and knows that he knows not is a student; teach him."

We're teaching you.

[Gwen]

alright look, im new to the world of spriting, i dont know anything about your file naming habits or anything, also i actually do think my work is good, but im sure others wont, so i post it to get there opinions on how to improve it
point is, i improved it based on your points so lets drop this whole mess okay?
im sorry to say, but i do get offended easily, even on the internet.

[halfangelfreak]

Trust me, Angel, I save my work as stuff like that when I'm bored and don't feel like coming up with a name for it.

[LeleleleMAXIMUM]

EDIT: I post slow

[Gwen]

edit:ok then.

[LeleleleMAXIMUM]

Umm, I edited my post LIKE YOU DID YOURS.
Stop losing your head over dumb things, kid.

[Gwen]

dude, it wasnt edited when i read it, sorry
dont jump to conclusions.

[LeleleleMAXIMUM]

Jesus Christ.
Just drop it.

[halfangelfreak]

Okay, this is all good and settled now, right? So let's just get back on topic.

[Gwen]

yes lets, like i said to posts and posts ago.*one more stab needed* , so anything else now before i start on intro.